jueves, 12 de marzo de 2009

The $ports business




Many people try, but just few of them are able to participate in the major leagues. Why do they want it? Because it is one of the most profitable professions in many countries.

Sports have thousands of fans all over the world and are those fans who give sportsmen and sportswomwen their money and fame.

But in a country with no budget for education it´s insulting to see how much our athletes earn, but what for?, that´s even more insulting, they don´t even have the same level as their counterparts in other countries, and those who actually do are paid less.

For some students in the U.S. being an athlete is the key for going to college, most of them without any academical achievement.

Here in Mexico, soccer is an indicator of how things are, because in the soccer team of the main public University, UNAM, are players who don´t study there! And they are paid with part of the University´s budget, that could be spent in research; but the worst it´s that UNAM is not even selling its own tickets of its own stadium, Ticketmaster, as usual, is in charge of that.

Sports as business could work in Europe, they have a better economy, but in Latin America it´s absurd and in Mexico it´s more. Loocking for more information on internet, I found out that in the top ten of best paid teams, six are Mexican teams, it could be because we (as population) can easily become fanatics, and take as role models people who are just good (or in some cases just average) athletes, a clear example is Maradona in Argentina who after being one of the best athletes became a cheater and now he is god.

In the end, going to a stadium, buying a T-shirt or spending our money in a most productive way is a personal choice.

Bread and sports to the people!
Score=18

22 comentarios:

  1. Hi Monse,
    I think you did a good job. I think that the opening paragraph could be a little bit more interesting. In general, I like the way you developed your arguments, but I think there are some ideas that should be better explained or contrasted with facts. Arguments like the way the UNAM budget is used might be much stronger if you used numbers and statistics, that gives more credibility to what you are saying.

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  2. Hi Monse
    Your article is a shot. I liked it. You use many examples and you set many problems in the table but you never lost the main idea. Good job.

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  3. Hi Monse!!
    The support of your ideas is interesting, but I think you should give us your point of view... but in general I think your text is ok..
    bye

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  4. Hi Montse, you did a good work, all the examples are well structured and you always maintain the principal subject
    Great job

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  5. Hi Monse:
    Indignity is what I felt while reading your work. I think it´s important to do a research before writing and you did it! I didn´t know some many things about UNAM team but know I knOw. I like the way you concluded as if you were saying it´s our decision either to perpetuate, or to stop this current situation

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  6. Hi Monse: I like you support really good the problem of the sport business, so I like the way you structure your ideas, so good work.

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  7. Monse:
    You did a good job, it was clear and well organized. I think you could tell you more about your point of view, but in general it was very good.

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  8. Hi Monse

    your composition it's interesting, I like the structure of your ideas, the use of examples was a good idea.

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  9. Hello Monse!!!
    The point of view that you exposed in your composition is really interesting because is the true and a lot of people ignore it. You have a good structure and the language use is fine. Good Job I really like it.

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  10. Hi monse: I think you did a good job because you mentioned different points in your writing!

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  11. Hi monse!!!
    I was really interesting reading your composition because of your perspective of the sports.It was esay to understand and it makes you reason about the real sense of sports.
    Good job!!!
    Robert

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  12. Hi Monse.
    Your composition is strong, it has very good arguments and it shows that you prepared before writing. You also gave many examples to show how absurd it was to pay them a lot. very good job.

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  13. hello Monse, I think you have strong arguments that settled your posture about the salary that athletes really deserve. I really share your points of view, because the salary of many people here (and not only athletes) is really absurd, and does not fit in the reality as a country with an economic situation as Mexico has. You did a good job!

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  14. the sport in general (specially soccer)is a great business, that is bad, and you give it to understand

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  15. Hi Montc,

    I like the way you think, you were able to manage all your ideas and they were well suported by giving a good argumetation, it's interesting because I didn't know the fact that mexican teams are the ones that spent tu much in salaries...

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  16. Monse:
    I like your text, I share your point of view about the whole subject.
    Just watch out when looking for information on the internet, most of it has no real cientific procedure behind what they claim.

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  17. Refrasing:
    "cintific procedure to back up their claims"

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  18. Hi Monse:
    You did a good job, it was well organized. Maybe you could write more about the point of view that you have about sports.
    Berenice

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  19. Hi Monse!
    I like the way you argue this controversial topic. It´s clear, objective and reflexive, what is the most important issue. Good job!

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  20. hi monse
    I agree with you, the point that you critize the way that the persons make their job, and the example about the soccer it´s interesting, only I suggest to have a strong end that make us conciencized.

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  21. Hello Monse

    I agree with the way you supported your ideas. The text is clear, just take care about mechanics. There are some msitakes on ortography that you should check.

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  22. Hi Monse

    Your composition it's very well organized and has good structure. I agree with some of your ideas, but I think you focus more in soccer sport and I guess it`s not enough reason to support your ideas. I totally agree with your point of view of soccer here in Mexico, it`s like an old proverb says "bread and circus for the town" in place to use the budget in research.
    good job

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